I like it! It's cute. (Disturbingly cute, considering one of these men is a gleefully unrepentant mass murderer and the other is . . . well, Archer.) They look so CUTE when they're sleeping . . . together . . . shirtless . . .
But I used to be GOOD at drawing! I won't bore you with pics, but I used to draw better than I draw now.
Actually, if I had it to do over again, I'd draw Greed exactly the same way. He got the little indents in his temples or whatever, the tiny little greed-brows... I think the only thing I really shouldn't have done was fill in the hair. It looked better when it was just hair-outline type thing.
Hrm... I was just flipping through a notebook here at work looking at chibis, and it appears someone snuck into my office, took my notebook, drew chickens, and returned the notebook unharmed... o_O